So, I had this weird yet cool dream. It was sort of freaky, actually. Anyways, I decided I should make it a story. Here's the basic plot of the story so far.
So there is this team of three serial killers on the loose. They are super strong and super fast, and they kill tons of people. They go into public areas and just start shooting. When the cops catch up to them they kill the cops. Everybody is really freaked out. Their next place is this mall.
Before the shooting starts, this girl at the mall buys a good luck charm from an old woman with a kiosk. The woman hands her three bills as change. Yet when the girl looks at them closer, they are all for $1000 and have pictures of the killers instead of presidents. The girl turns to the old woman, but she and her kiosk are gone. That's when the killers begin. There are three of them: one who's sort of like Hulk Hogan, a big macho muscly guy, one who is smaller and nimbler, who wears one of those old canvas gasmasks, and one who's a bit pudgy and sallow. The guy with the gasmask is killing near the girl, so she hides and follows him, curious about the bills she has. She follows him down into the sewers beneath the mall, where the guy starts to hang himself. Then he sees the girl, and she starts running. He chases her aboveground, and they're running on the road. The guy runs in front of this big truck, and the truck swerved and falls on its side, so it slides down the road after them. The girl trips and falls, and the guy catches up to her. She asks him why he kills and he shrugs. Then she asks him if he is going to kill her and he says no, then grabs her and slides down this really steep slope on the side of the road, just before the sliding truck hits them.
The guy brings the girl to the other killers, and they explain to her that they have superhuman abilities and they kill so much because they sold their souls to the devil. They hate killing, and want to buy back their souls, but the devil only accepts a certain kind of money, the bills the old woman gave the girl. The girl tries to give them the money, but it won't leave her hands. So she decides to help them by buying their souls herself. So then they go to find the devil. And that's what I have so far. I think it would make a great action movie, actually.
The story will have themes about murder, guilt and remorse, along with pure evil and greed, and impulsiveness. A nice twisted story. I'll start writing it later.
Sunday, March 9, 2008
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3 comments:
that sounds really good
im kinda feeling twisted...
but it really does sound like a good action movie or book
update it when you have more
I will. I've been writing like crazy. What should the girl's name be? I started with Sheila but then I realized that I hate that name. But the Killers have awesome names. Poison, Rage and Dagger.
I will. I've been writing like crazy. What should the girl's name be? I started with Sheila but then I realized that I hate that name. But the Killers have awesome names. Poison, Rage and Dagger.
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